Great title and an interesting discussion, as always.
FWIW, here is a draft script copy:
https://archive.org/stream/pdfy-dAGrPNY ... t_djvu.txt
Indeed, the football scene is not in the script at this juncture.
I concur with what epaddon said and will expand further--'Fathom,' starring Raquel Welch, almost feels like some post-Semple episodes of Batman when Batgirl needs to be rescued. I think you guys should take a look at that film on a subsequent podcast. It was released in 1967 and was directed by Leslie Martinson, so it had the same writer-director team as the '66 movie.
You guys made a good point--there is some Stanley Ralph Ross-ish dialogue.
I will disagree about the color palette. Yeah, it was too garish, but I'll take that any day over modern films/TV shows that seem to be shot at night and in rooms without lamps so you never can tell who is doing what to whom. Or, almost as bad, they are shot in muted shades of blue and gray to relate the ennui and desperation of the characters. After about 5 minutes of such a film, I'm thinking, 'OK, we get it, can you take the filter off the lens now?'
'I thought Siren was perfect for Joan.'--Stanley Ralph Ross, writer of 'The Wail of the Siren'
My hobbies include gazing at the Siren and doing her bidding, evil or otherwise.
'She had a devastating, hypnotic effect on all the men.'--A schoolmate describing Joan Collins at age 17